Page 6 has gone through some enhancements – let’s see what we have done with it…


I tidy up the placement of the word ballons. It’s a page of talking boobs, let’s not hide them.

Contrast: made the last panel and its shadows darker and added some highlights on the characters and crystal ball, looks more like a dark room now.

A little detail but I like how it turned out – added white blurry corners to the top panel making it round like the crystal ball.

And a bunch of minor things.

Here’s a little thing I just relized – the spacing between the rows of text in comic typography tends to be quite tight so I adjusted that. And you’ll save a tiny bit of space too.

Ok, that’s one page, that’s 70 more pages to go…